ENVIRONMENTAL POLLUTION
I-Introduction:
Hook: nowadays, when people have such a high living standard, the Earth has become the target of many kinds of pollution
Background: While some environmental pollution is a result of natural causes such as volcanic eruptions, most is caused by human activities. So we can classify the types of environmental pollution by many different ways such as the economic source,
Thesis statement: There are three major types of environmental pollution according to the object of pollution
II Body:
Paragraph 1:
-Category1: The first type of environmental pollution according to the object of pollution is land pollution
-Supporting details:
+Definition: land pollution comprises the pollution of soil with materials mostly chemicals that concentrate higher than normal.
+What causes land pollution: chemical and nuclear plants, industrial factories, oil refineries, mining, littering.
+ Effect of land pollution:
*Contaminants alter plants give bag crops indirectly affect people’s life
*Mostly has effect on ecosystem of plant.
*Reduce the fertility of soil, causes the soil erosion
+Facts about land pollution:
*It causes us to lose 24 billion tons of top soil every year.
*Every year, one American produces over 3285 pounds of hazardous waste
+Conclusion:
Paragraph 2:
-Category 2: The second type is air pollution.
-Supporting details:
+Air pollution is the accumulation of hazardous substances into the atmosphere that danger human life and other living matter.
+Some the main contributors to air pollution are: dust, smoke from industrial zone and from vehicles, vessels or tobacco smoke, fumes from paint, hair spray, nuclear weapons, toxic gases, wildfires…
+Effects:
*The most serious is to cause the dead to many people:
*Affects human’s life and causes some other diseases: pneumonia cancer, asthma, lung and heart diseases…
+Facts:
*Every years 33500 Americans die of lung cancer, which is a direct result of air pollution.
*The UK suffered worst air pollution event when the December 4 Great Smog of 1952 formed over London. In 6 days more than 2000 people outright died and injured everywhere, then 600 of whom later die from their injuries
-Concluding sentence: air pollution brings human the heavy damage
Paragraph 3:
-Category 3: The third type is water pollution.
-Supporting details:
+Definition: Water pollution is the contamination of water bodies such as: lakes, rivers, oceans…
+What causes water pollution:
*Insecticides, herbicides, fertilizers and other medical compounds used in agriculture
*Chemical waste of industrial factories
*Lubricant, mechanical oil from sank boats
+Effects:
*Kills mass of lives that inhabit water_ based ecosystems such as: fish, birds…
*Human can get diseases such as hepatitis, by eating seafood that has been poisoned.
*Drinking poisoned water can cause: poor blood circulation, cholera or damage to the nervous system.
+Facts: every year, almost 25% of US beaches are closed at least once because of water pollution.
-Concluding sentence: Water pollution directly affects submarine life and indirectly affects people’s health.
III-Conclusion:
*Restatement:
In conclusion, there are three types of environmental pollution according to the object of pollution, land, air, water
*Prediction, advice, or statement:
Development is always an ultimate goal that human bring want to achieve. However, the earth is everybody’s home and nobody likes living in a dirty home. Together, both of government and citizens have to take actions to protect the environment around for us and future generations.
Thứ Bảy, 29 tháng 5, 2010
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY OUTLINE
TOPIC: SHOULD CHILDREN BE PHYSICALLY PUNISHED?
Hook: in the past people do irreparable damage to their children.
Bg: Physical punishment is the infliction of punishment on the body. Children were punish extremely. People own their children and do whatever they want.
Thesis: I personal think that children should not be given physical punishments for some following reasons:
BODY
P1:
Topic sentence: physical punishment may suffer children’s mental
Supporting ideas:
1. children are always in fear mood. They are frightened and also lost their feeling of safeness
2. they are haunted by the scenes of being beaten.
3. lead to bad relationship between parents and their children. there will be a distance that prevents both sides from getting along.
4. children may become criminal when they grow up.They take out their anger and hurt on others. They have a tendency to treat others like who used to suffer them.
P2:
Topic sentence: Physical punishment is harmful to child’s health
Supporting ideas:
1.reproduction health will be influenced
2.Because of their youth, their bones are delicate, so the development will be slow down.
Ex:there are many kids in the world were on paper, or on air whose degree of disablement are at high level can not give birth
P3:
COUNTER ARGUMENT: not punishing children make them become disobedient.
Supporting ideas:
1. they become stubborn, they would do anything without permission
2. they would not respect the elders.
3. them would become irresponsible.
Ex:Those kids who are being pampered by their parents have no definition with the word " punishments". They believe that everything they did are not wrong so they comfortably continue their behaviuors even hurt people feelings. they become naughty. Depending too much on parents form them irresponsible behaviours.
REFUTATION: Punishing children really help them become obedient kids?
Supporting ideas: Punishments are a fast way to make them obey but not a best way to teach them.In US children are protected by children right law system, people are not permit to punish kids even their parents. Parents will absolutely face the law if they hurt their children. Instead of using physical punishments such as: hitting beating, spanking, swatting, caning; parents should use another way such as: forbid them watching their favorite programs, or ban them visiting their friends, .etc
Conclusion:
Parents who love their children will not want to hurt theirs. So do not try to treat children by physical punishment because predecessor did that. “Children like a white sheet of paper. The important thing is that how we write on it”. Because children are among the most vulnerable members of society and it is society’s duty to protect them and their rights.
Hook: in the past people do irreparable damage to their children.
Bg: Physical punishment is the infliction of punishment on the body. Children were punish extremely. People own their children and do whatever they want.
Thesis: I personal think that children should not be given physical punishments for some following reasons:
BODY
P1:
Topic sentence: physical punishment may suffer children’s mental
Supporting ideas:
1. children are always in fear mood. They are frightened and also lost their feeling of safeness
2. they are haunted by the scenes of being beaten.
3. lead to bad relationship between parents and their children. there will be a distance that prevents both sides from getting along.
4. children may become criminal when they grow up.They take out their anger and hurt on others. They have a tendency to treat others like who used to suffer them.
P2:
Topic sentence: Physical punishment is harmful to child’s health
Supporting ideas:
1.reproduction health will be influenced
2.Because of their youth, their bones are delicate, so the development will be slow down.
Ex:there are many kids in the world were on paper, or on air whose degree of disablement are at high level can not give birth
P3:
COUNTER ARGUMENT: not punishing children make them become disobedient.
Supporting ideas:
1. they become stubborn, they would do anything without permission
2. they would not respect the elders.
3. them would become irresponsible.
Ex:Those kids who are being pampered by their parents have no definition with the word " punishments". They believe that everything they did are not wrong so they comfortably continue their behaviuors even hurt people feelings. they become naughty. Depending too much on parents form them irresponsible behaviours.
REFUTATION: Punishing children really help them become obedient kids?
Supporting ideas: Punishments are a fast way to make them obey but not a best way to teach them.In US children are protected by children right law system, people are not permit to punish kids even their parents. Parents will absolutely face the law if they hurt their children. Instead of using physical punishments such as: hitting beating, spanking, swatting, caning; parents should use another way such as: forbid them watching their favorite programs, or ban them visiting their friends, .etc
Conclusion:
Parents who love their children will not want to hurt theirs. So do not try to treat children by physical punishment because predecessor did that. “Children like a white sheet of paper. The important thing is that how we write on it”. Because children are among the most vulnerable members of society and it is society’s duty to protect them and their rights.
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