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Thứ Hai, 5 tháng 4, 2010

Quin Shi Huang

I am very interested in chinese histories. Each Dynasty gave me a lot of things to learn , but the Qin Dynasty has placed an unforgettable impression in me. That is Quin Shi Huang, who is considered the emperor’s first in chinese history because he had work to destroy the vassal time of War National and unified the empire of China. Quin Shi Huang was known to have been a tyrant because of his strict policy of domination, ambitions and brutality.

Being under the strict policy of domination, public life under Quin Shi Huang suffered many hardships. He passed touch rule that applied to everybody and used laws to decide. In general, he was the god and his laws are justice which represented his wills. People did not have the right for themselves. Tyranny, heavy hard labor, taxes and rude punishments brought people great disaster and suffering.

His ambitons are incredible.To complete the unification of China Huang, was thinking of expanding the foreign realm and that led to many wars. Asoblutely, wars were cruel, they brought dark scenes, deaths, ruins to people. He once attacked Viet Nam named Au Lac at that time and brought failure back to China. He also wanted to be immortal so he could complete his aspirations through out the world. That ridiculous thought once again caused deaths of people.

Quin Shi Huang, a tyrant that is very brutal. For nearly 40 years of sitting on the throne, he has been known for many actions as crime, such as :building the Great Wall, burning books and burying students and build a tomb for himself. The Great Wall nowadays is one of the greatest wonders of the world, but it did cause a lot of peope dead to build it. The mystery of the construction of the wall is amazing and it all was built by the great army of manpower, soldiers, prisoners, slaves and local people. People were forced to build to death, the chance to come back home was none and the Great Wall became the graveyard for many people. Students at that time were angry and criticized his brutalities. As the result, 460 student were killed and books also were burnt. Not only that, the tomb made many sorrows. It not only cost a lot of manpower and resources but also took away 70,000 people who were buried alive to keep the tomb secret and a large group of female who served him when he was alive. What a cruel emperor he was!

In conclusion, Quin Shi Huang was a talent man because he unified China, had effort in standardizing currency, language, writing, units of length, size, weight which promote economic development. Besides, he is considered tyrant who is cruel, violent, and extreme. I also have bad feeling about this man but I have to accept a truth that he is one of a successful emperor of all time.

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  1. In conclusion, Quin Shi Huang was a talent man because he unified China, had effort in standardizing currency, language, writing, units of length, size, weight which promote economic development...... is against your thesis


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